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Old 21-06-09, 04:10 PM   #1


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I rush upstairs
to my room
that dark place full of gloom
feeling down feelin sad
feelin angry feelin mad
the first thing i see
is a pic of you and me
i see the scissors
i pick them up and start to cut
not the pic of you and me
but myself
i become pain free
Its not long lastin
its not a cure
but its enough
until the next time i walk threw that door.


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Old 21-06-09, 07:06 PM   #2


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Nice Poem! If Your On Advice Of Self harm I Recommend You To The Suicide/Selfharm Section..




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Old 22-06-09, 01:17 AM   #3

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I LOVE your poem!
On the advice, you can try the Depression, Self-Harm, and Abuse section, like Tommy said, and if that doesn't help, then try the Love, Relationships,and Crushes section.




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Old 03-07-09, 11:05 PM   #4


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thanks, but what do you mean by advice? as i don't think i gave any advice.
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lol they meant if you wanted advice.
but nice by the way.




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Old 05-07-09, 04:48 PM   #6


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oh okay, thanks, i get it now
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Old 08-11-09, 12:30 PM   #7

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sounds right to be honest,
very good
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Old 08-11-09, 12:58 PM   #8
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sounds right.. jupp..
really good








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it's really good. only thing is the misspelling of through on the last line








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Old 08-11-09, 01:18 PM   #10
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lol.. typical you to notice xD but indeed it is very good








Well i just saw the sun rise over the hill
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