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Old 21-06-09, 08:10 AM   #1
 
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Smallsmileys202 Scissors *may be triggering*

I rush upstairs
to my room
that dark place full of gloom
feeling down feelin sad
feelin angry feelin mad
the first thing i see
is a pic of you and me
i see the scissors
i pick them up and start to cut
not the pic of you and me
but myself
i become pain free
Its not long lastin
its not a cure
but its enough
until the next time i walk threw that door.


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Old 21-06-09, 11:06 AM   #2
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Nice Poem! If Your On Advice Of Self harm I Recommend You To The Suicide/Selfharm Section..
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Old 21-06-09, 05:17 PM   #3
 
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I LOVE your poem!
On the advice, you can try the Depression, Self-Harm, and Abuse section, like Tommy said, and if that doesn't help, then try the Love, Relationships,and Crushes section.
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Old 03-07-09, 03:05 PM   #4
 
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thanks, but what do you mean by advice? as i don't think i gave any advice.
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Old 04-07-09, 07:29 PM   #5
 
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lol they meant if you wanted advice.
but nice by the way.




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Old 05-07-09, 08:48 AM   #6
 
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oh okay, thanks, i get it now
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Old 08-11-09, 04:30 AM   #7
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sounds right to be honest,
very good
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Old 08-11-09, 04:58 AM   #8
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sounds right.. jupp..
really good








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Old 08-11-09, 05:16 AM   #9
 
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it's really good. only thing is the misspelling of through on the last line




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Old 08-11-09, 05:18 AM   #10
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lol.. typical you to notice xD but indeed it is very good








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