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Old 30-11-09, 05:38 PM   #11
 
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As in the story behind all the demons and their existence. And by vibe I mean general aesthetic of the names and stories of that region.
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Care to detail a little more, I'm not not following. XD









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An aesthetic is more or less a view or impression of something.
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I get the feeling you think I'm asking what words mean...

I know what that means but I'm just not understanding what exactly you are talking about.
Okay, do you have any ideas on what you said or what?









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Okay, so the demons are characters, right?

I would guess some of the demons have their roots in Afro-Asiatic folklore. What I would do, is write stories of them that carry the same vibe as the original folklore, but are different stories.
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Yes.
So what you mean is to break the story down to focus on an individual character (or whatever) one at a time.

Okay, now what is Afro-Asiatic folklore of said demons?
I mean I don't know of this folklore.









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The only demon of Afro-Asiatic folklore that I am familiar with is Satan. Would you rather discuss this over an instant messenger? It would be a lot faster.
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Don't have an IM, sorry.

Okay, so if Satan is the only one then how am I to make it based on that exactly?
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You would want to make up different demons entirely, with different names and stories. I would stick to Afro-Asiatic sounding names and themes, but creating names that sound like they are from other cultures can also be interesting.

For instance, I created a demon in one story named Acacuiyatl. Acacuiyatl means frog in Nahuatl, and the demon is froglike, and has origin in Mexico, so it makes sense.
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But the point is that the demons represent the Seven Deadly Sins - that's part of the plot.
So, naw, I'm not gonna create any more demons.
I may create beings made of magic though.









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