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I recently found out about a whole list of Demons[en.wikipedia.org] and decided I wanted to create a story using some of the demons.
Now, it's a bit complicated but basically it involves a family with magic and summoning abilities and they can sommon one of the Seven Vice Demons (Seven Deadly Sins).
Those would be, as follows:
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- Lucifer (Pride/Vanity) - Can change from Male to Female depending on which sin over-rides the other. Pride (Male) and Vanity (Female). Has short black hair (long when female) and Violet colored eyes. Secretly, he's a Masochist (only Satan is aware of this though) and has too much Pride to ever admit to it. He hates women with a passion and therefor refuses to transform into one. He's the most powerful of all Demons on the account of he's actually a Fallen Angel. He's a servant of Michael.
- Leviathan (Envy) - Is a Mute. Communicates by writting on a notebook pad. Generally tends to say in Female form. Has long dark brown hair which she puts into twin tails that lay behind her back and Green eyes. Originally a sea monster - she gave up her voice to transform into a human. She is a servant of Gabriel.
- Satan (Wrath) - Has enough power to generally stay in his non-defult form of a Male. He's very cruel and Sadistic. He often taunts Lucifer for a variety of things (usually his Masochism or how he actually obey's a human master). He's very disobediant. He has short black hair and Red eyes. He is a servant of Raphaela.
- Belphegor (Sloth) - Not much is known about him, not even his real gender (but for all intended purposes he's spoken of as Male). He's generally apathetic and lazy, not all that powerful but he does not subcum to his emotions like most of the others. He has waist-length silver/gray hair and Light Blue eyes. It's been said that his hair is a weapon of it's own - soft as cashmere wool but as strong as steel. He is a servant of Uriel.
- Mammon (Greed) - He's a loyal servant but he's also selfish and greedy. He claims that he can change genders at will because there is no gender difference for greed because everyone is greedy and selfish but he say's he prefers his Male form. Because of this he's also more powerful than he let's on. He has short brown hair and Gold eyes. He is a servant of Raguel.
- Beelzebub (Gluttony) - As her sin suggests she's a heavy eater. She say's she used to be more powerful in the past because more people used to eat more than their fill. She blames Lucifer for the loss of her power because he made women so vain that the refuse to eat which will eventually lead to the death of more women (see above). She's close with Lilith because they are both the youngest and they both hate men. She has shoulder-length redish-blonde hair and Orange eyes. She's a servant of Zerachiel.
- Lilith (Lust) - The craziest one of the bunch. Always thinks with her hormones rather than her head. Originally she was the first woman ever created and was supposed to be Adam's wife but she always insisted that because they were created from equal matter that therefor she was better. Lucifer always daid that if God made one mistake, it was creating Lilith. He also say's that if he made one mistake it was turning Lilith into a Demon. She's known as "the worlds first feminist" by some. She flaunts her magic abilities, will not hesitate to use human sexual sacrifices. She corrupts men to their cores and is the most common out of all the sins due to having her children doing her dirty work. She's against love to the highest degree but will trick both men and women into thinking their lust is love. She hates men and most of all she hates Lucifer.
She has blonde hair and Blue eyes. She's a servant of Ramiel (called Remy).
The Four Core Demon Kings of Hell can all be summoned by the Vice's or by their masters, depending on the situation.
Master's Bio:
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Michael - Lucifer's Master. Claims that none but one of the Vice's can touch him because the only sin he's ever commited would be Sloth. He's an Albino. Has white hair and purple eyes. He's 24 years old but doesn't look like it. He's very good at fighting.
Gabriel - Levi's Master. He's Michael's younger cousin and is 23 (but looks older than Michael). He likes to tease his family and servants just because it's in his nature. He's colorblind and a bit of a pacifist but can fight when need-be.
Raphaela - Satan's Master. Gabriel's little sister and Michael's younger cousin. She say's that she always had a crush on Michael because he knows exactly what she had to go through growing up - considering she's also an Albino. She can be clingy to certain people. Her and Satan don't get along well at all because she thinks more with her head (dispite what others thing). She has white hair and Pink eyes. She's 18.
Uriel - Belphegor's Master. He's an only child and is the cousin of all the others. Other than that not much is known about him.
Raguel - Mammon's Master. Michael's younger brother and only 17 years old. He has brown hair and brown eyes. He has no desire to be in this competention and therefor gives Mammon the freedom to do whatever he wants so long as he protects him when need-be and doesn't kill any of his family.
Zerachiel - Beelzebub's Master. He's the younger brother of Gabriel and Raphaela. He's never been one to eat very much. He has dirty blonde hair and Green eyes. Not much of a key player. He's 15.[
Ramiel "Remy" - Lilith's Master. She's constantly fed-up of Lilith's constant attempts to try and get her to have sex. That being said, she's a Virgin and can therefor summon other Demons and Creatures that others cannot. So far, throughout their family's history she's been the only who's never given into Lilith's Temptations. She's deemed the most headstrong of the bunch. She's Michael's and Raguel's little sister and is only 14 years old (but looks more like 12). She represents Chastity, has long black hair and Blue eyes.
Most of them have the power to summon more than just one of the Vice's.
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An Explosion from the Core of My Body! It's at the Summit; There is no Escape! How Much More Time Until the Stupid Little Girls Become Women? With Your Cute Voice; Cry Out to Me, Your Elder Sister [erepublik.com]
With Your Sliced Throat, Call Me Your Queen
Both the Dream-like Aching of My Wounds and the Severe Dripping of My Blood How Much More Time Until the Thoughtless Little Boys Become Men? The Eyes of Lust and Sadism Look Sadly at the Valley of Ecstasy, The Reflection of Happiness
An Explosion from the Core of My Body! It's at the Summit; There is no Escape! How Much More Time Until the Stupid Little Girls Become Women? With Your Cute Voice; Cry Out to Me, Your Elder Sister [erepublik.com]
I like this idea, but personally, I think it is somewhat cliché and I would advise you to add something else to it, but it's your story, not mine.
How and what exacly?
With Your Sliced Throat, Call Me Your Queen
Both the Dream-like Aching of My Wounds and the Severe Dripping of My Blood How Much More Time Until the Thoughtless Little Boys Become Men? The Eyes of Lust and Sadism Look Sadly at the Valley of Ecstasy, The Reflection of Happiness
An Explosion from the Core of My Body! It's at the Summit; There is no Escape! How Much More Time Until the Stupid Little Girls Become Women? With Your Cute Voice; Cry Out to Me, Your Elder Sister [erepublik.com]
The idea of demon summoning, and the use of biblical ideas seem just a tad cliché to me. Do you want me to suggest what you should add or tell you what I would add?
By the way, with "cliché" I don't mean bad by any means.
Please, tell me both.
I may like some, I may dislike some but if you have idea's to offer then it is fine.
With Your Sliced Throat, Call Me Your Queen
Both the Dream-like Aching of My Wounds and the Severe Dripping of My Blood How Much More Time Until the Thoughtless Little Boys Become Men? The Eyes of Lust and Sadism Look Sadly at the Valley of Ecstasy, The Reflection of Happiness
An Explosion from the Core of My Body! It's at the Summit; There is no Escape! How Much More Time Until the Stupid Little Girls Become Women? With Your Cute Voice; Cry Out to Me, Your Elder Sister [erepublik.com]
I would create a story as to the origin of the demons that is contrary to that of the biblical ones. I might try for the same Afro-Asiatic vibe of the bible, but I would do a different story altogether with a similar theme.
I think you should maybe add another family, or other families into the mix, and possibly add more magical and supernatural properties to the story other than demonic ones.
I like the idea of adding another family, so I'll try that.
Although, I'd have to do a lot more research...
But there are 72 demons I could use so I'd like to stick with the demonic properties.
However, I did intend to do a little research on magic because the 72 Demons of the False Hierarchy can only be summoned through magic.
As for the origins, most of the 7 demons are not mentioned in the Bible and if they are then it's non-specific.
For example, Lucifer fell from Heaven and became Satan. But, in this - they are two seperate beings.
As for Lilith, she's only mentioned in Judism (I believe).
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I might try for the same Afro-Asiatic vibe of the bible, but I would do a different story altogether with a similar theme.
Elaborate a little please?
Ah, I just had an idea. I *do* have 72 demons at my disposal after all...
With Your Sliced Throat, Call Me Your Queen
Both the Dream-like Aching of My Wounds and the Severe Dripping of My Blood How Much More Time Until the Thoughtless Little Boys Become Men? The Eyes of Lust and Sadism Look Sadly at the Valley of Ecstasy, The Reflection of Happiness
An Explosion from the Core of My Body! It's at the Summit; There is no Escape! How Much More Time Until the Stupid Little Girls Become Women? With Your Cute Voice; Cry Out to Me, Your Elder Sister [erepublik.com]
Afro-Asia is a linguistic region. The region does hold its own cultural and linguistic (it is a region set by language after all) similarities. Judaism, Christianity, and Islam all have Afro-Asiatic origins. Same with the Ancient Egyptians, and Arabs.
Now, knowing your great number of demons, I think you could do a whole story sticking with just that. If you want plot help, then I'm here.
But what did you mean by "vibe" and what you said about "do a different story altogether with a similar theme"?
With Your Sliced Throat, Call Me Your Queen
Both the Dream-like Aching of My Wounds and the Severe Dripping of My Blood How Much More Time Until the Thoughtless Little Boys Become Men? The Eyes of Lust and Sadism Look Sadly at the Valley of Ecstasy, The Reflection of Happiness
An Explosion from the Core of My Body! It's at the Summit; There is no Escape! How Much More Time Until the Stupid Little Girls Become Women? With Your Cute Voice; Cry Out to Me, Your Elder Sister [erepublik.com]
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