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I get up early
On a Monday morning
Its 6AM
And I’m still yawning.

I drive down the long steep slope
On and on
There’s no hope.

I keep on going,
until I get to town.
When I’m there,
all I can do is frown.

I pay the money,
to get a ticket.
Then I think,
I’m gunna tell them,
Were to stick it.

I stand there waiting,
and out the corner of my eye,
I catch a glimpse,
a glimpse of light.

Its 7AM,
when it arrives.
I need to wake up,
but I close my eyes.

I have a long day ahead,
and all I want to do,
is go back to bed.

About my Poem:: Well I wrote this at 7am on a monday morning on my way to school. If you didnt understand what its about, it is about me getting up in the morning and having to go in to my local town to go and catch a TRAIN to school! Yea I go everyday to school by train. I was bored and not looking faward to the day ahead! I hope you liked my poem! if it gets any comments Thanks In Advance!!

Lmao love it! It's so true as well

hehe I am glad you liked it! Thanks

I like it. It shows what you were feeling when you wrote it, the essence of good poetry.

Thats really good =]

-Cassie =]

Thank you for all your nice comments

Awesome!
I like how it's so original and is your own style.
Keep on going with these, and remember, don't be afraid to post them if they're about love xD

Thanks Kerry! That means a lot to me

Haha, I love it! It's very true and well written.

Thanks ^^