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Old 26-09-11, 09:15 AM   #1
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I wrote this during Portuguese class today, out of melancholic, tedious boredom. It's not great, I am not satisfied with the result myself. But I decided to post it anyway.

Warped and Twisted


All the magic; he can no longer see.
The love and smiles; all have faded.
The nightmares have made him completely
Warped and Twisted.

The fear and pain are gone.
His soul, tainted.
So here he stands all alone.
Warped and Twisted.

And so he tells a pathetic lullaby.
And so he sings a sickening song.
Like the Winter, his soul is dry,
Everything now is terribly wrong.
Nothing in his mind is clear,
All of it is wicked,
He's still here,
Warped and Twisted.

Such a beautiful tale of insanity.
Graceful nightmares have never faded.
But this; this is his reality,
Dead,
Blood-red,
Degraded,
Shifted,
Warped and Twisted.
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Old 26-09-11, 09:29 AM   #2
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Love it. I'd give you an A*
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It's good.
I like the picture as well
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I loved reading it John <3
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Old 26-09-11, 10:51 AM   #5
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Maybe it's a boring class, but your teacher talking must be really inspiring
I love how breathless it sounds.
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Old 26-09-11, 10:56 AM   #6
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Old 26-09-11, 10:57 AM   #7
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Maybe it's a boring class, but your teacher talking must be really inspiring
I love how breathless it sounds.
Not really, my teacher talking makes the entire class fall asleep.
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