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Old 27-10-11, 10:18 PM   #1
 
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Default Some Poetry.

You are my savior and my curse.
You are always there when I feel hollow.
You take away my anger and sorrow.
You make me feel alive.
You help me survive.

You are my savior and my curse.
I love it when you are pressed up against my skin.
I can’t help but close my eyes and grin.
I always want you close to me,
Without you, I go crazy.

You are my savior and my curse.
You tend to damage me every time we’re close.
You kiss my skin, making beautiful, red rows.
I can’t be seen with you, people don’t understand.
They don’t realize that I always need you at hand.

You are my savior and my curse.
I’m addicted to your touch, you’re a poison.
You make me see ivory painted with crimson.
Every time a scar begins to fade,
I need you, my blade.
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Old 28-10-11, 07:42 AM   #2
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That's quite good to someone your age.

Well done.









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Old 29-10-11, 07:46 PM   #3
 
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Icon10 Re: Some Poetry.

its really nice
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