Teen Forums - Teen Chat, Teen Help, Teen Advice & Support


If this is your first visit, be sure to check out the FAQ by clicking the link above. You may have to register before you can post: click the register link above to proceed. To start viewing messages, select the forum that you want to visit from the selection below.



Creativity, Arts, Design, and Poetry Creative teenager? Share your art, poetry, and writing in this forum.

Like Tree14Likes
  • 8 Post By Singularis
  • 2 Post By Neverland
  • 2 Post By Vertigo
  • 1 Post By FromDownAbove
  • 1 Post By Gray

Reply
Old 26-11-11, 01:13 PM   #1
独特
 
Singularis's Avatar
 
Name: Yue Han
Gender: Male
Join Date: Jun 2010
Location: Faro, Portugal
Posts: 7,244
Singularis has a reputation beyond reputeSingularis has a reputation beyond reputeSingularis has a reputation beyond reputeSingularis has a reputation beyond reputeSingularis has a reputation beyond reputeSingularis has a reputation beyond reputeSingularis has a reputation beyond reputeSingularis has a reputation beyond reputeSingularis has a reputation beyond reputeSingularis has a reputation beyond reputeSingularis has a reputation beyond repute
Icon1 Decadent Soul - 3 poems

I've been writting a compilation of poems which I named Decadent Soul. It's mostly just venting poems, and most of them aren't very good. They weren't made to look fancy, or to sound good, just to vent. I decided to post here 3 poems which are part of this compilation.
I haven't checked the poems for typos or mistakes, so I apolgize if there are any.


-----

Gone


After all that went on
Now you are gone,
And here without you,
I don't know what to do,
All I have ever feared,
Was that you disappeared,
And so it has become true,
And I stand without you.

So I will go out at night,
Get into every possible fight,
Every poison I shall drink,
Hoping our sorrow shall sink,
This wound I can't seem to heal,
So I will find ways to not feel,
This monster I have now become
Stays because I can't stay numb,
Can't be numb but I can't cry,
So I shall find a way to die,

But in this pit I will have to stay,
Struggling and trying to find my way,
Suffering untill life and death meet,
In agony, alone in this cold street,
Because people expect me to stay strong,
When everything around me has gone wrong,
So I shall try to live somwhere I don't belong,
Suffocating, dacing in depression forever long.

-----------------------



Just Dance


The Dark is coming with a knife,
So run, run for your dear life,
The one that's not there,
Because the Dark does not spare
And this agony you can't bare,
So in panic you will still run,
And the Dark will keep having fun.

Everywhere you can see the pain,
All around you can hear the cries,
All these yearns will be in vain.
It does not matter, everyone dies.
Everybody will eventually leave,
Much more sooner than later,
So there is no use to believe,
When everyone around is a traitor.

Against the Dark, you stand no chance,
So my dear, don't resist, just dance.

------------------------


Forbidden Love


Waking up amongst the wrinkled sheet of my bed,
A headache torments the memories of you in head,
Memories of all we shared and all we had said,
Memories of your deep tender eyes and soft hair,
The memory of the fact that you're no longer there.

Amongst these wrinkled sheets, my soul feels dead,
Tainted with a numbness cancer which has spread
Through all my heart, So I shall write instead.

Write about all these bright memories which I hold so dear,
Your soft touch and the sweet words you whispered in my ear.
So now I stay in this darkened room, alone I shall write here.
Write endless hopeful songs which your ears will never hear.
Write dimoralising verses which your eyes shall never read.
Write about my hopeless trapped spirit which will never be freed.

Alone in this melancholoc room now, I have nothing to hold.
Without you here, the whole world around me has gone cold.
Standing under these wrinkled chilly sheets in a night of storm.
The seraphic memories of you are the only thing to keep me warm.
But they only keep me warm untill I am reminded that I'm all alone.
So here, in solitary confinement, under the sheets I turn to stone.

Ensnared in loneliness, the memories of you grow old,
Forever has passe, my mind no longer has track of time.
Those moments will never be back, as so it was foretold,
So hidden in this dark room, I shall write another rhyme.
Damned to live closed up, untill my body runs out of air.
My feelings decayed and my soul numb, because fate is unfair.

Nothing to help me stand against the chilly, disruptive weather,
Every raindrop cuts me deep,because fate won't let us together.
Destiny has cursed me, a curse which I shall never be free of,
So in the Dark, I shall love you the way I am supposed to love.

Hidden in shadow, in secret,
With my mind gone mad wicked,
It pains my heart so much,
To see you but never touch.
So I shall love you hidden,
Because our love is forbidden.








Singularis is offline   Reply With Quote
Advertisement
Old 26-11-11, 02:33 PM   #2
An Undercover Panda
 
Neverland's Avatar
My Mood:  Bookworm
 
Name: Lauren
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Join Date: Aug 2011
Location: UK
Posts: 8,381
Neverland has a reputation beyond reputeNeverland has a reputation beyond reputeNeverland has a reputation beyond reputeNeverland has a reputation beyond reputeNeverland has a reputation beyond reputeNeverland has a reputation beyond reputeNeverland has a reputation beyond reputeNeverland has a reputation beyond reputeNeverland has a reputation beyond reputeNeverland has a reputation beyond reputeNeverland has a reputation beyond repute
Default Re: Decadent Soul - 3 poems

Stunningly wonderful.

You have a real talent and I really enjoy reading your work.
Singularis and Pandemonium like this.









Kirk <3
Neverland is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 26-11-11, 02:37 PM   #3
Stuck in Reverse
 
Vertigo's Avatar
My Mood:  Positive
 
Name: Jared
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Join Date: Jun 2011
Location: Florida, USA
Posts: 6,351
Vertigo has a reputation beyond reputeVertigo has a reputation beyond reputeVertigo has a reputation beyond reputeVertigo has a reputation beyond reputeVertigo has a reputation beyond reputeVertigo has a reputation beyond reputeVertigo has a reputation beyond reputeVertigo has a reputation beyond reputeVertigo has a reputation beyond reputeVertigo has a reputation beyond reputeVertigo has a reputation beyond repute
Default Re: Decadent Soul - 3 poems

Exceptionally good. All of your work dominates as raw passion, yet is far more beautiful then any of your subject matter.

Continue forward, sir.
Singularis and Pandemonium like this.








“It always seems impossible until it’s done.”- Nelson Mandela


thesuttonproject.tumblr.com
Vertigo is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27-11-11, 02:43 AM   #4
 
FromDownAbove's Avatar
My Mood:  Pensive
 
Gender: Male
Join Date: Nov 2011
Posts: 412
FromDownAbove will become famous soon enough
Default Re: Decadent Soul - 3 poems

All three were amazing, Gone being my favorite. Extraordinary
Singularis likes this.




_______________________________



FromDownAbove is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27-11-11, 02:51 AM   #5
There's No Compromise...!
 
Gray's Avatar
My Mood:  Nerdy
 
Name: Gray
Gender: Male
Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: TeenForumz
Posts: 8,709
Gray has a reputation beyond reputeGray has a reputation beyond reputeGray has a reputation beyond reputeGray has a reputation beyond reputeGray has a reputation beyond reputeGray has a reputation beyond reputeGray has a reputation beyond reputeGray has a reputation beyond reputeGray has a reputation beyond reputeGray has a reputation beyond reputeGray has a reputation beyond repute
Default Re: Decadent Soul - 3 poems

perfect poems <3
Singularis likes this.








A Ship is Safe in a harbor indeedly , but .. thats not what ships are made for , right ?



It Gets Better , I Promise

Gray is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27-11-11, 03:23 AM   #6
 
Name: Charlotte
Gender: Female
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: England
Posts: 5,736
Charlotte. has much to be proud ofCharlotte. has much to be proud ofCharlotte. has much to be proud ofCharlotte. has much to be proud ofCharlotte. has much to be proud ofCharlotte. has much to be proud ofCharlotte. has much to be proud ofCharlotte. has much to be proud ofCharlotte. has much to be proud of
Default Re: Decadent Soul - 3 poems

I like them all, especially the first one.
Charlotte. is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off



All times are GMT -7. The time now is 04:55 PM. Powered by vBulletin®
Copyright ©2000 - 2014, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
SEO by vBSEO ©2011, Crawlability, Inc.








     Friends: Friends Circle
TeenForumz will never have pop-up or annoying ads. Thanks for NOT supporting us!