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Old 29-11-11, 04:47 PM   #1
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IX - The World had gone cold




Dear souls, now we behold,
The story about to be told,
About the world we live in,
A place filled up with such sin,
As the world has gone cold.

The storm rages outside,
There are people in the rain,
They have nowhere to hide,
Their cries are in vain,
They have no one to hold,
And the world has gone cold.

Of any hope they're denied,
And so comes with the tide,
Swinging them all around,
And in anguish they drown,
The storm goes uncontrolled,
And the world has gone cold.

The storm has passed away,
And all those who drowned,
Lay wasted on the ground,
Amidst ruins they decay,
Their memories grow old,
And the world has gone cold.

After witnessing such a view,
You couldn't believe it was true,
Now the storm is coming for you,
And you know you can't fight,
So you stand still and simply write,
Just let the lovely story unfold,
And your world will now go cold.
-Singularis
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Old 30-11-11, 07:46 AM   #2
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As I said before, I quite liked it. Though the ending didn't have the impact your other poems usually hold. :p










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