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Old 06-12-11, 02:42 PM   #1
 
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I wrote this poem 6 months ago due to a bad breakup =)
Hope you like it.

First look was amidst a crowd,
I never did this before,
But I greeted you despite everyone around,
Hello followed by I wanna see you more,
A simple request I asked of you,
And your answer was me too,
It took a moment to talk by hours,
Everything felt great,
It felt like sweet fate,
Everyone kept envying,
How un-ordinary friends we became,
How they didn't experience the same,
Bestfriends was our fame,
Lovers was our secret name,
Still every story has a bit of shame,
For our love ended like a game,
But I keep asking myself,
Why did It just feel right?
Sitting down by that tree,
Under the moon's light,
Yet Despite every feeling we held inside,
You just couldn't let be,
Where u afraid of me?
Or of what was uncertain to be?
Questions with answers I never wanna know,
For I enjoyed the moments we had,
I enjoyed life's tragedy show.


- Moh. Saeed.


P.s : I know it's not that good
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