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Old 26-12-11, 12:31 PM   #1
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Mother
Who knows everything
Who I adore
And would never leave
Mother
You're perfect

Mother
Whose flaws I see
Who I adore
And would never leave
Mother
You're Wise

Mother
Whose flaws I only see
Who angers me constantly
Who I want to walk away
Mother
You're terrifying










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Old 26-12-11, 12:34 PM   #2
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Seems like each stanza is a different stage of one's life.

I like this.








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Old 26-12-11, 01:33 PM   #3
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Sounds like my mom too! lol









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Old 26-12-11, 01:34 PM   #4
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Quite good, ese.








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Old 26-12-11, 01:35 PM   #5
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Danzig's song came to my mind when I read the thread title. =P

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Old 26-12-11, 01:38 PM   #6
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@Singularis

You are correct

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Old 27-12-11, 11:47 PM   #7
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haha, such an accurate depiction of our transitional perception of our primary caregivers. =)
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Old 29-12-11, 08:55 PM   #8
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I still love my mommy though <3










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Old 30-12-11, 12:18 AM   #9
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Great poem
I guess I went through these stages just not in that order my younger child hood was pretty fucked up...still love mom!
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