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Old 28-01-12, 07:03 AM   #1
 
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Hidden blades, Hidden Knives, Hidden lies,
Frontin me is a good way to get slit and die,
Fighting over shit is america's forbiddin' right,
I don't gotta hide from this, I'll just get rid of guys,
Think you dope? You ain't got a clue what dope means,
Like a rope and tree, you'll choke, is what I'm hoping.
Your only idea of a life is in the sims 3,
Us in a fight? You know who'll win- me,
See I'm just trying not to be offending,
but gee, its my limits people be bending,
And now I'ma spend the last lines of this shit,
saying like dat ass? yo, It's mine you can kiss.
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Old 28-01-12, 07:07 AM   #2
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I think this is legit better than what my no-skill self would ever write. But it's rather dark though. Like, something you'd hear from a punk/emo band that has a member that has a rapper.But t gets less darker each line.








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Old 28-01-12, 07:08 AM   #3
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Good stuff. Problem you have now is seeing if it actually sounds good with some beats
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Good stuff. Problem you have now is seeing if it actually sounds good with some beats
Thanks to you and the other guy (Can't remember the name- fail)

Also, I'm downloading the producer edition of FL studio (A beat making device for those who don't know) and will use a crappy mic I have until I can afford a new one.
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Yeah a guy I know uses FL and some other program for his music, uploads them to soundcloud later on. Dw bout the mic though, gotta start somewhere I guess eh? Goodluck
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Yeah a guy I know uses FL and some other program for his music, uploads them to soundcloud later on. Dw bout the mic though, gotta start somewhere I guess eh? Goodluck
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aw yeah fl studio is great download a few kits too like the Zaytoven one it has a hundred 808 bass noises and a bunch of other instruments








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Interesting reading kind Sr.
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In a good or bad way.
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last 2 lines were my favourite

good way of course
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