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Old 05-04-12, 09:30 AM   #1
 
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Default Nightmare !

He gets a call from the doctor , says there's problem
he better hurry , he's so worried
he's afraid he'll hear bad news , he's so confused
his girls in a coma , he's going fast in an old nova
he's getting paranoid , the radio's playing pink floyd
its rainin , radio's still playin
he reaches his destination , lightening starts flashin'
it doesn't look good , he tries to keep calm and cool
he enters the door , no one's home
he looks for the doc , finds him staring at the clock
asks him whats wrong , he says he's sorry
its like his blood stopped flowin

He rushes , dashes ,
looking for his girl in desperation
his hearts crashin'
he finds the rooms , goes in there's nothing but gloom
he's starin at a dead body , he's so sorry
he cant control his emotions
shes gone , he's now lost
he's so mad , yet so sad ,
the doctors standing
he loses it , punches him
rages out the door , throwing stuff on the floor
gets in his car , and sets off
while the clouds cry along

He lost it , he's on the freeway
cop comes up sirens sounding
he's speedin , now tryin to ground it
he pulls over , cop comes out
he realizes and finalizes
his lifes over , if he gets jailed
he knows he has already failed
there's no excuse in it
thats when the cops on his shoulder , knockin the window
he pushes the gas , and the tyre scratchs
cop steps back , he's off man
he has lost it , its like the weights on him have lifted
but he don't want that , he wants her back
wants the gravity to pull him back , its to late that's to bad
he wants her to be there stopin him , shoutin , cryin , screamin at him
he don't care if she hits him , he wont put a hand even then on her
he don't want to live , better of dead then to be in this pain
cops on his tail , tyres screachin
bridge's coming up , he drives of it

that's when he opens his eyes
looks around and realizes he's alive
he realizes it was just a night mare , while sitting on a chair
that's when he remembers he's at the hospital
looks on the bed sees his girl laying there , that ought to be sad
but he's glad , that she's still alive
tears coming down his eyes
gets up goes over to her
says he loves her
says come back he ain't complete without her...
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Old 05-04-12, 09:54 AM   #2
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Default Re: Nightmare !

Wow.. :(

Almost made me cry (I thought that's how things legit happened.)
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