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Try and steal a leaf from a tree, when you fail, realize that it was never meant to be,
But my predicament is complicated, annoying even-ranging from failed cries to unrecognized stolen gazes,
I know better than to interpret it as hate, but you might not, to think of thoughts ranging from fate,
to failure, failure to escape the grasp of leaving things as it really is, to have truly forgotten, any escape other than cowardice,
Our gazes only last for a mere second, filled with the weight of things yet spoken, the truth of
which, inturn-set me on this solitary path of confinement, alone, abandoned, scared witless to speak the obvious, afraid of news of renewed failure made scandalous,
But even I hear the loud screech of silence, through walls, despite desperate cries stuffed high with pleads of resilience,
I am weakness personified, hoping to myself that my weak chance of success will allow my inaction to be justified, that maybe by raising the white flag of a shut mouth, you may seek to bring to a new, revitalized, state of being, the essence of which has long since been broken, corrupted,
Yeah, the crime of unspoken words you have every right to condone,
But I'll be honest;
*Even if my heart turns to stone, we'll never be apart and you will never be alone.*

This is a random poem I came up with today. This is my first time writing an actual poem outside of class assignments and such. But ya, Sorry DeepDistress, that last * line was stolen from your signature. Otherwise though, the poem is about 95% mine.
Ya, sometimes I surprise myself too.
Never thought that it would come up out as well as it did but, uh, ya. Enjoy my first tentative step into the world on poetry, the fact of which I needed to prepare myself for mentally,
Victory, finally, I understand the importance of a good rhyme, to enlighten my day and keep me energized!
Failure? Pfft!
I know I've got the will, and if I'm write, you'll find me giggling at the bank swimming in a silver pool of dimes,

I could go on forever today, so make sure you remember that no matter what I'm gonna do it my way! Reguardless though, I genuily hope you guys enjoy it, keep it tough on the love and constructive on the criticism.
Thanks.

Sampling, thats that stuff that I like

Funny, that line from Kate's signature was actually written by me, she puts my poems on her signature. Just saying It's fine to use it.

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Yeah no way I could write anywhere near John's writing

Luckily he's amazing and lets me steal/use them ;D <3