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Old 26-01-10, 06:18 PM Replies: 16 Views: 330   #1
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Wrote this about a kid who's pissing me off atm! He thinks i told his mum "personal stuff" about him, when actually i didn't. He just has no one else to blame for his immaturity. So therefore, **** you loser. I don't need you, or ur up yourself behaviour.



You can do whatever you want to me.
You're a libel, and that's all.
You can say whatever you want to me,
You'll never bring me down.

I may have cried to you before,
But this time you took it too far.
I await the day that you grow up,
And realise that you are no better.

I long for the moment that you see,
That I am me, and you are you.
You cannot run my life,
Or tell me what to think.

I have a mind, and i'll use it.
Whatever you say, it's just words.
I could never understand you fully.
You confuse me like hell.

We used to be really close,
Our bond is now broken.
It wasn't my fault, I promise you that.
But pledging to you, won't bring you back.

I don't care if you tell people this or that,
Like I said, you no longer matter.
Yes we were friends, good ones if that.
But you walked away, why should I come back?

I have my man in my life,
You and your little friends mean nothing.
Say what you want, do what you want.
I don't need you, I have him.





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[09:41:21] Gabi: and she's like OMG guys can we go now?
[09:41:30] Gabi: and im like.. sit your white ass down and be patient
[09:41:51] Tom: oh gab you're so black : )[/I]
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Old 26-01-10, 07:47 PM   #2
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I really like this

You're a great writer. I hope I can read more in the future








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Old 26-01-10, 07:51 PM   #3
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Really good ! Your poetry skills are really good, hope to see you posting a few more poems









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Awww Thanks Guys! <3




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Old 26-01-10, 09:28 PM   #5
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Your poetry skills are really, really good! :]
I hope you'll be writing more in the future!








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Old 26-01-10, 09:32 PM   #6
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I Will, Just for u hehehe. There'll be more tomorrow.




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see ... pissed off poetry is heaps of fun hehe and as the others have said - i wanna see more




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i suck at english so whats a libel?

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see ... pissed off poetry is heaps of fun hehe and as the others have said - i wanna see more

SHould have listened to you a looooooong time ago mate




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You should write more poetry related to rebelling and questioning. Would you give permission for the poem to be seen into other sites with credits?
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