User Image
Posts: 1244, Threads: 15
Last Activity: 03-02-12 11:16 PM

Teen Forums - Teen Chat, Teen Help, Teen Advice & Support


If this is your first visit, be sure to check out the FAQ by clicking the link above. You may have to register before you can post: click the register link above to proceed. To start viewing messages, select the forum that you want to visit from the selection below.



The Official Rant Room Rant about your life and the world around you. Had a bad day there? Teens let off their steam here.

Reply
Old 26-01-10, 11:18 AM   #1
Banned
My Mood:  Psychedelic
 
Name: Gabrielle-Penelope
Gender: Female
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Luxembourg
Posts: 3,871
mz.relativity is on a distinguished road
Default Libel

Wrote this about a kid who's pissing me off atm! He thinks i told his mum "personal stuff" about him, when actually i didn't. He just has no one else to blame for his immaturity. So therefore, **** you loser. I don't need you, or ur up yourself behaviour.



You can do whatever you want to me.
You're a libel, and that's all.
You can say whatever you want to me,
You'll never bring me down.

I may have cried to you before,
But this time you took it too far.
I await the day that you grow up,
And realise that you are no better.

I long for the moment that you see,
That I am me, and you are you.
You cannot run my life,
Or tell me what to think.

I have a mind, and i'll use it.
Whatever you say, it's just words.
I could never understand you fully.
You confuse me like hell.

We used to be really close,
Our bond is now broken.
It wasn't my fault, I promise you that.
But pledging to you, won't bring you back.

I don't care if you tell people this or that,
Like I said, you no longer matter.
Yes we were friends, good ones if that.
But you walked away, why should I come back?

I have my man in my life,
You and your little friends mean nothing.
Say what you want, do what you want.
I don't need you, I have him.

mz.relativity is offline   Reply With Quote
Advertisement
Old 26-01-10, 12:47 PM   #2
Based on a true story
 
Rogan's Avatar
My Mood:  Happy
 
Name: Josh
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: South West, UK
Posts: 2,909
Rogan has a brilliant futureRogan has a brilliant futureRogan has a brilliant futureRogan has a brilliant futureRogan has a brilliant futureRogan has a brilliant futureRogan has a brilliant futureRogan has a brilliant futureRogan has a brilliant futureRogan has a brilliant futureRogan has a brilliant future
Default Re: Libel

I really like this

You're a great writer. I hope I can read more in the future








Invention, my dear friends, is 93% perspiration, 6% electricity, 4% evaporation, and 2% butterscotch ripple.
~
The truth is out there...anybody got the URL?
~
Don't forget to be awesome.
Rogan is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 26-01-10, 12:51 PM   #3
The Element of Surprise!
 
Lemanstom's Avatar
My Mood:  JustChillin
 
Name: Tom
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: England
Posts: 7,924
Lemanstom has much to be proud ofLemanstom has much to be proud ofLemanstom has much to be proud ofLemanstom has much to be proud ofLemanstom has much to be proud ofLemanstom has much to be proud ofLemanstom has much to be proud ofLemanstom has much to be proud ofLemanstom has much to be proud of
Default Re: Libel

Really good ! Your poetry skills are really good, hope to see you posting a few more poems








A computer once beat me at chess, but it was no match for me at kick boxing.

Lemanstom is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 26-01-10, 01:08 PM   #4
Banned
My Mood:  Psychedelic
 
Name: Gabrielle-Penelope
Gender: Female
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Luxembourg
Posts: 3,871
mz.relativity is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Libel

Awww Thanks Guys! <3
mz.relativity is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 26-01-10, 02:28 PM   #5
Meganekko~
 
Itachi's Avatar
 
Name: Kerry
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: UK, Blackpool
Posts: 6,566
Itachi has a reputation beyond reputeItachi has a reputation beyond reputeItachi has a reputation beyond reputeItachi has a reputation beyond reputeItachi has a reputation beyond reputeItachi has a reputation beyond reputeItachi has a reputation beyond reputeItachi has a reputation beyond reputeItachi has a reputation beyond reputeItachi has a reputation beyond reputeItachi has a reputation beyond repute
Default Re: Libel

Your poetry skills are really, really good! :]
I hope you'll be writing more in the future!








You know I'm gonna find a way to let you have your way with me,
You know I'm gonna find a time to catch your hand and make you stay.

I don't care what clothes you wear, it's time to love and I don't care,
You know I'm gonna find a way to let you have your way with me.
Itachi is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 26-01-10, 02:32 PM   #6
Banned
My Mood:  Psychedelic
 
Name: Gabrielle-Penelope
Gender: Female
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Luxembourg
Posts: 3,871
mz.relativity is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Libel

I Will, Just for u hehehe. There'll be more tomorrow.
mz.relativity is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27-01-10, 03:06 AM   #7
 
Winga's Avatar
My Mood:  Bonkers
 
Gender: Male
Join Date: Dec 2009
Location: Australia
Posts: 825
Winga is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Libel

see ... pissed off poetry is heaps of fun hehe and as the others have said - i wanna see more




_______________________________



Come here my star is fading
And I swerve out of control
And I swear I waited and waited
I've got to get out of this hole
Winga is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27-01-10, 05:23 AM   #8
 
bharg14's Avatar
My Mood:  Angelic
 
Name: Benjamin
Gender: Male
Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: Australia
Posts: 145
bharg14 has a little shameless behaviour in the past
Default Re: Libel

i suck at english so whats a libel?

define:libel - Google Search [google.com.au]
bharg14 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 27-01-10, 08:34 AM   #9
Banned
My Mood:  Psychedelic
 
Name: Gabrielle-Penelope
Gender: Female
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Luxembourg
Posts: 3,871
mz.relativity is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Libel

Quote:
Originally Posted by Winga View Post
see ... pissed off poetry is heaps of fun hehe and as the others have said - i wanna see more

SHould have listened to you a looooooong time ago mate
mz.relativity is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 28-01-10, 05:03 PM   #10
 
AntischoolSide's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2010
Posts: 12
AntischoolSide is on a distinguished road
Default Re: Libel

You should write more poetry related to rebelling and questioning. Would you give permission for the poem to be seen into other sites with credits?
AntischoolSide is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off



All times are GMT -7. The time now is 09:52 AM. Powered by vBulletin®
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
SEO by vBSEO ©2011, Crawlability, Inc.







Hey