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Old 24-10-11, 07:43 AM   #1
 
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Hi guys,so I need help in my English Class home work. I am not American, and I really need help but I don't know where to post lol.
The homework is:

Q1. '' Teenagers play different roles in everyday life,at home,at school and elsewhere. Write about the most important roles that you play as a teenager '' there needs to be introduction,main body and conclusion. ( 350-500 words )
Q2. ( you want to enter a short story competition.Your story must end with the following word. '' He carefully cleaned his fingerprints off the key and replaced it in the drawer '' Write the story ) 300-500 words

I CAN write them but the problem is,I am in my senior high school and If i get a single mistake then I might get my marks reduced,trust me it is extremely important :(
That is why I need help from fellow Americans I really hope you guys will help me.I am sure you will.




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Old 24-10-11, 08:45 AM   #2
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Well, write them and then you can send them to me via private message if you want. I can do some editing and give you tips on how to improve.
Also, early modern English comes from England, not America.
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Write it first and then post it on this thread or somewhere and I can look through & just to let you know, I'm English.









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yup.. obviously no one is gonna write it for you, but if you write and then post we can help
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Well, write them and then you can send them to me via private message if you want. I can do some editing and give you tips on how to improve.
Also, early modern English comes from England, not America.
My course is from England,your right but I don't know any English site. lol
Can you guys like,write the introduction cause' thats where I find it difficult.
or at least,tell me what I should write in the intro. , body and conc. .
1 mistake = - marks
Please post the quickest time possible cause I am gonna have to give it after exactly 16 hours.
btw,I was like 99.9% sure nobody is gonna write me the essays LOL
I usually give them to the fat kid in my class.....no offense.




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Uh... I would say you need to be doing that yourself.

I would understand if you wrote it then asked for critique, but asking people to write it for you is lazy and arrogant.
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Right, after reading that, especially the bit about the "fat kid" in your class, im definitely not going to help you. Get off your fucking lazy ass and figure it out yourself. If you dont want to, fine, but youre going to have a hard time in life, and you wont have any "fat kids" to help you then fool.
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Right, after reading that, especially the bit about the "fat kid" in your class, im definitely not going to help you. Get off your fucking lazy ass and figure it out yourself. If you dont want to, fine, but youre going to have a hard time in life, and you wont have any "fat kids" to help you then fool.
The 'fat kid' offers to write them for me ( have you noticed the 'no offense' ),and you are seriously being unbelievably rude and classless.I swear, I thought Americans were HUGELY nice.
btw,I apologize for calling the kid 'fat',I seriously feel really bad for having said that.You could have said 'don't say that' or something.
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The 'fat kid' offers to write them for me ( have you noticed the 'no offense' ),and you are seriously being unbelievably rude and classless.I swear, I thought Americans were HUGELY nice.
btw,I apologize for calling the kid 'fat',I seriously feel really bad for having said that.You could have said 'don't say that' or something.
Anyways,thanks to everyone who posted in this thread
Saying 'no offense' means nothing except that you are going to insult someone but don't want to be blamed for it. There was no need to add the word fat, that just makes you looks as though you're looking down on them. You could have simply said 'a kid in my class'.
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Saying 'no offense' means nothing except that you are going to insult someone but don't want to be blamed for it. There was no need to add the word fat, that just makes you looks as though you're looking down on them. You could have simply said 'a kid in my class'.
well,I didn't know that 'no offense' means THAT. I thought it means I don't want to offend anyone. I am not American and English is my second language.
And...I am sorry and you are right,I shouldn't have said the word 'fat'. -.-
And btw,thank you for talking to me politely.It just means you are a good person.




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