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Old 31-10-11, 07:12 PM   #1
 
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HEY GUYZZZZZZZZZZZZZ, i was wondering if someone would like to proof-read my paper for english 3 AP. I would have my teacher look over it like I usually do, but she's out because her mother just passed away :(.

It's about a columnist and basically their writing styles. I'm mainly looking for people who are good at editing word choice n stuff.




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Old 31-10-11, 08:13 PM   #3
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in rubbish with English sorry








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I can I'm a prodigy in English my, dad drives my insane with it.
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Old 31-10-11, 10:20 PM   #5
 
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PM me and I can have a look at it.
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Old 01-11-11, 06:51 AM   #6
 
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I'd like to read it, whether I'd be any good helping you out I won't know until I have.
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Old 01-11-11, 07:20 PM   #7
 
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THANKS GUYS! I'M SENDING IT TO ALL OF YOU!




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I can take a look as well.








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