01-12-11, 07:39 PM
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Name: Runna :)
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Re: PROOF READING!
btw, you're getting off track, Vertigo. This paper is about annoying things about Christmas and the point I was making was that people care more about Christmas shopping than they care about the National Debt, and of course you can argue that, but again, this is a sarcasm and i am making a lot of exaggerations..... I mean obviously, the government isn't ignoring this problem.
and if i really meant that, then i would back it up with a statistic. however, this is not formal writing.
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Now I vomit cum and diarrhea
On the tile floor, like oatmeal-pizza
Fill my toilet bowl, full of a cloudy puss
I feel the blood, becoming chowdered rust
Last edited by Runnadoll; 01-12-11 at 07:41 PM..
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